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Chapter: Chapter 11 the Watcher of the Broken Moon, The Bean Comic

Characters: earthdwellers, Fencer Per, Mither Kinderloc, Ravna, red rock trolls, Roc Noc

Location: Carpoth, Dark Leaf Forest, Ruins of the Red Rock Trolls, The Underground

We are pushing forward with our stretch goals. I need your help as well. Please share, tell your friends. If we meet the 10000 mark I can add more pages to the book itself.

SAN DIEGO COMIC CON

Comic con starts this week – actually today and for the next 4 days I will be BOOTH E11 drawing FREE SKETCHES to anyone that wants one. Plus I will have new prints and Books 1 and 2. Come join the fun

thanks and keep creating-

trav-

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James_Rye » 8 Dec 2013 » Reply

Wait, so the Red Rock Trolls lived in the abadonned cities of the eathdwellers or did I misunderstood something here?

SotiCoto » 6 Sep 2013 » Reply

What order to the frames / panels go in on this page?

Is it across then down+back, or down then across+up?

It isn't immediately apparent from the speech, so far as I can tell.

Elihion » 12 Jul 2012 » Reply

Hi matey,

Just doing some Q&A for you.

Panel 1, Speech bubble 3 .. I have always know(n)…

Panel 2, Speech bubble 2… The oldest of your town(s)…

Enjoy Comiccon… wish I was American, sadly, there’s nothing that big here in the UK… Ah well, tis life.

Regards,

Eli.

Trav the bean » 16 Jul 2012 » Reply

got it.

Comic-con was fantastic – one day we would love to see you over here.

Janell » 12 Jul 2012 » Reply

I need you guys to look at the pages for me 🙂 oops!

Trav the bean » 16 Jul 2012 » Reply

🙂

msouth » 12 Jul 2012 » Reply

another nitpick edit–"After all" is two words.

I really love the dialogue on this page. Just makes you fall in love with this character who is working so hard and long to help another group of people, to try to right an ancient wrong, etc.

Trav the bean » 16 Jul 2012 » Reply

"got it":)

and I think it roc noc is an incredible individual. He's seen a lot and been around a lot. I guess age makes one think about the past quite a bit, trying to right the wrong of an older generation.

SotiCoto » 6 Sep 2013 » Reply

And "afterall" is those two fused into one word.
No meaning lost. Only awesomeness gained.

Mihnea Murgeanu » 12 Jul 2012 » Reply

hi again Trav… could not believe how i counted the days to the new page
hope it will go nicely at the comic con
maybe these nice guys could get over the kickstarter page and comment there as well?
or on some comic blogs ? 😀

Trav the bean » 16 Jul 2012 » Reply

thanks – i am glad you are excited about the whole story- and we would love every shout out that we can get- for both the kickstarter and the blog! 🙂

DadaHyena » 12 Jul 2012 » Reply

Love those aerial shots!

Trav the bean » 16 Jul 2012 » Reply

thanks

idjster » 12 Jul 2012 » Reply

Hi, Trav. Two small things. First panel, third balloon – should be 'known' instead of 'know' (he speaks good English otherwise, so it's not an idiom error) and the panel below it – 'earthdwellers' should be 'earthdweller's' with the apostrophe. The first panel, too, should 'substance' be 'sustenance'? Either works, I guess.

You asked us to do this, you know. 🙂 Thanks for a great comic!

Gillsing » 12 Jul 2012 » Reply

About the Earthdwellers and that apostrophe, isn't it supposed to go after the "s"?
Like this: Earthdwellers'

If it goes in front of the "s" (Earthdweller's) it would mean that he's referring to a single Earthdweller. And he's using the plural everywhere else on the page.

Trav the bean » 16 Jul 2012 » Reply

i am noting them all- these pages will go through huge edits before print