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have an incredible thanksgiving today.

keep creating

trav

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Gundo » 24 Nov 2012 » Reply

You might want to swap "insistent" for "persistent" there in panel three. "Persistent" made me wonder how long the messenger resisted going to fetch Ravna, and why Roc Noc, faced with a such a stubborn prospective messenger, didn't just come find Ravna himself.

I might think too much about words.

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