Chapter: Chapter 12 the Dragon Hunter, The Bean Comic
Characters: Janos Pidgewig, Ravna
have an incredible thanksgiving today.
keep creating
trav
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Gundo » 24 Nov 2012 »
You might want to swap "insistent" for "persistent" there in panel three. "Persistent" made me wonder how long the messenger resisted going to fetch Ravna, and why Roc Noc, faced with a such a stubborn prospective messenger, didn't just come find Ravna himself.
I might think too much about words.
I can't say enough good things about the atmospherics of your art. It's so immersive!
Sven Böttcher
the young Hero find “the sword” and must proof himself against a huge Monster. Hmm.. with the last Page i hear the “Bossfight Theme” from Secret of Mana.
Rumblefeather
Bob!!!! Oh goddess!!!!! What have they done to you?!