Jeffersmurf » 7 May 2014 »
I love how the kids are tackling Tannis in the background.
msouth » 31 Oct 2013 »
"only thing your good for" should be "only thing you're good for"
Everyone, if you're posting a correction, at least check if someone else has seen it and said something first. There only needs to be one to be sure it's been seen (I'm assuming this is helpful so that everything gets caught before printing, hopefully that's correct.)
Lurker » 4 Sep 2013 »
Typo: "your back" –> "you're back"
SotiCoto » 9 Sep 2013 »
It says "your are back" at the moment.
Rob » 26 Aug 2013 »
Dah, first panel, "your" should be "you're". Otherwise, like where the story is going! Nice to be back with the refugees.
Celidah » 22 Aug 2013 »
Crazy how stories can hit home, huh? I can only imagine when it's your own story. I am so happy that your family is still alive, and good luck with the trial.
I love how the digital work is shaping up. Looks good, Trav.
trav » 17 Aug 2013 »
ok it should all be fixed
Caleb » 17 Aug 2013 »
There seems to be a page missing between this page and the previous.
Ruthie » 17 Aug 2013 »
Is it just me, or are the lines on this page thinner, more refined? I like the look, and it makes Ben's angry eyebrows in the last panel more imposing.
trav » 6 Dec 2013 »
inking digitally now.
I can't say enough good things about the atmospherics of your art. It's so immersive!
Sven Böttcher
the young Hero find “the sword” and must proof himself against a huge Monster. Hmm.. with the last Page i hear the “Bossfight Theme” from Secret of Mana.
Rumblefeather
Bob!!!! Oh goddess!!!!! What have they done to you?!