Chapter: Chapter 14 Wandering Souls, The Bean Comic
Location: Dundane Plains
The Bean 509
5 Comments
kaitou » 18 Aug 2013 »
Er, minor typo? Panel 2: "…nothing left of your for the dogs…" should be "left of you" or maybe "left of your <something>"? Looks like one of mine when I change my mind from doing something like the latter and changing it to the former (i.e. drop the "<something>" but forget to change the "your").
Oddly, I won't complain about the "yes mam.." as I count the "mam" as a colloquialism, the lack of a comma as an indication of a lack of a pause and the two dot ellipsis as a curtailed continuation.
SotiCoto » 9 Sep 2013 »
All in all, if Trav is dyslexic as I vaguely recall was briefly mentioned many many pages ago… then the many words he doesn't get wrong are somewhat more impressive than the few he does.
Still, I suppose they do need to be pointed out from time to time.
kaitou » 9 Sep 2013 »
I'm always of two minds when I see typos. Some people don't like having them pointed out; some do. I figure it's better to err on the side of not having it show up in the book. (I prefer having them pointed out to me, even though I don't plan on publishing a book; whereas, I know Travis is going to be publishing one.)
Trav the bean » 9 Sep 2013 »
i dont mind it- Since this is more of a preview for everyone – i know i'm gonna get edits. When the books go to press- then the editing process goes into full gear – spelling errors, phrases, etc…
Trav the bean » 9 Sep 2013 »
it all will go through edits as we set the books for prints and yup i am surprised as well – what words i no longer miss:) see old dogs can be taught
I can't say enough good things about the atmospherics of your art. It's so immersive!
Sven Böttcher
the young Hero find “the sword” and must proof himself against a huge Monster. Hmm.. with the last Page i hear the “Bossfight Theme” from Secret of Mana.
Rumblefeather
Bob!!!! Oh goddess!!!!! What have they done to you?!